I love you. You love jasper?

two entries in a day.. hoho. so many firsts

anw back to the 'overall impression' thingy. since symbolic images are said to be more powerful and touching. i dunno i find confessional poetry powerful. u dun understand everything that is said but u still feel tt raw emotion exuding from the words. tts powerful. running repetition of similar ideas and images.





the bear takes a little walk
down Hougang Central

his wasted time a holiday from
teddy bear

the clock the duck the realisation
hatred

strangled fowl steals heart of bear
i couldn't believe my tongue
i couldn't believe my nose

the crime the holiday produced
tantamount to
seeping bear's
blood

the hands that yearn in pain
wish to strangle` keep me sane`
kick the duck` scrap the friends
stretch them thin like a rubber band

evil rear evil rear evil
unhand clean blood civil

i take the pledge
my claw are Wolverine
sharp and blunt they scrap
the inside out my sin

the bear's holiday expired
my wound inspired

too late too late he says
i wish him head? i wish him not
what what my duty fails
image of cot
i see nothing

Nothing will come out of nothing!
I'm lost
frightened
desperate
helpless
in need of my teddy bear......

11/3/05










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